It is to the point and short with no distractions, that's great. Something about the anatomy of the characters are unusual.
Art can be many different things, it is embarrassing to see you didn't even try. It would've been funny if it was April 1st.
It is difficult to understand who and what is happening. You could start by using more than one drawing utensils.
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